Today in class Mr Igoe helped me edit my work. He told me to focus on giving evidence, which is something I knew would make my writing much more interesting and believable. I had stated in my presentation that I felt I was getting manipulated into believing the book was completely accurate so in my writing I have to make sure I am giving evidence as to why I believe what I am reading. He also helped me figure out how to incorporate quotes better. He wants me making it flow into my writing, which is actually a much easier way to use quotes. I started working on my next sign which is Scorpio and these small tips were helping majorly with my writing process.